How our Thriller idea is moving forward

After the feedback which we got from Matt and Simon, we decided to alter our thriller concept. We were still really keen on keeping the two seperate cars with the couple and the mysterious man in each, however we decided to change the time period and setting of the piece. We decided to change the setting to the top floor of a carpark, as this would be empty and would be mysterious, and we decided to change the time period of the thriller to modern day as this would be easier to create. However we decided to put a bit of a twist into the plot, and make the woman an evil character who is secretly on a side with the evil man, however this wouldnt be shown until the very end of the clip. It would be symbolyised that the woman is evil through the fact she is wearing a red dress and red lipstick, but she would have been seen as being a couple with the man she is in the car with, and we would see her giggiling and flirting with the man. We then see a sniper target on the woman, and it looks like the woman is going to be killed, and as she is going in to kiss the man, she gives a slight look towards the gunman (who is the mysterious man in the other car) and then he will pull the trigger, however; it is not the woman who gets shot, it is the man.