Account of Thriller Pitch

We pitched the presentation which we made to our teachers Matt and Simon, explaining to them clearly how we wanted the opening sequence to look. Some of the feedback that we got from them was that the story needed a punch line at the end, as the idea at the moment was that no one would get killed but we would just build suspense throughout. They also said that the concept of a large projection screen and old fashioned cars would be very difficult, and it would be easier to filmed if we could change the setting somehow. Overall they said they liked the idea but it is a hard concept to film, so  we should play to our strengths and take the things that we like out of it, such as the concept of the two different cars and the evil and innocent characters, and move the idea forward somehow. This was quite a positive process as it encouraged us to move forward with the idea and expand on it, changing some things around to make it a more realistic idea for filming and a more attractive film for an audience.